Last Friday, 27th of April 2007, we went to Taman Buah Mekarsari. I would like to tell you about the description of our mud fight in the paddy's mud place. We made a line in front of a huge yucky, smelly and slippery mud, but it really smelled like a pile of dirty socks that haven't been washed in 4 years. This kind of smell stayed on my nose. We slipped in, SPLOOSH! Someone had jumped in and its smell had effected me since I saw the muddy field. Mrs. Jane
began to throw a sticky, slimy mud to one of my friends.
Create Your Own CountdownMy friends are inside the mud, begining to throw each other balls of mud like fighting with each other from a baby until Grade 3. The others (including me) were outside, waiting, waiting and waiting. I was so scared to be inside the mud, but, I was forced to go in with my friends.
Here is a picture of a pig playing in the mud. We played just like that!
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Caca, I give you 8 out of 10 because you did a wonderful job and you included pictures and comparative sentences and paragraphs. There are few small mistakes however.
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